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Homework:

Please use the following words in complete sentences:

1. leisure
2. soon
3. try
4. usually
5. alone

1. Luxurious leisure like yacht, is only permitted for the riches.
2. The patient got an injection, and soon sedated.
3. I've tried my best, but the result always disappoints me.
4. The president usually wear fit suit, that is difficult to pull off.
5. Single-Person Household are rapidly increasing in Korea, that means many people are living alone.

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Good day Jason! :) You've done a fantastic job with this homework. Good sentence construction and use of vocabulary words. I am very impressed by your sentences. Keep up the good work! :) Please do review my corrections carefully. Thank you very much!


1. Luxurious leisure like yacht, is only permitted for the riches.
>> Luxurious leisure like yacht cruising, is only for the rich.
2. The patient got an injection, and soon sedated.
>> Correct. OR The patient got an injection and was soon sedated.
3. I've tried my best, but the result always disappoints me.
>> Correct.
4. The president usually wear fit suit, that is difficult to pull off.
>> The president usually wears fit suits, which is very difficult to pull off.
5. Single-Person Household are rapidly increasing in Korea, that means many people are living alone.
>> Single-Person Households are rapidly increasing in Korea, that means many people live alone.
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