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When you hear the term \"chance,\" what comes to mind?

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Chance envisions a good opportunity to grow me further. However, whenever I hear the term "chance", I try to keep myself alert at all times not to lose a good opportunity I run into. As the Korean old saying, when I can get a chance, I make sure I get it because I can't get a chance whenever I want to get it.

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Good evening, Steve! ^^,)

It's true that opportunities don't come our way every day; yet, a wise man once observed, "Temptation leans on the doorbell, while opportunity may only knock once." We might be entitled to an opportunity after our hard effort. However, one must be mindful of any chances that may present themselves. Today, a lot of people lose many possibilities because they are too preoccupied with their own work.

Thank you for this composition. See you later in class.^^

__T. Mayleen :)


Chance envisions a good opportunity to grow me further.
>>> Chance sees a great opportunity for me to advance.
However, whenever I hear the term "chance", I try to keep myself alert at all times not to lose a good opportunity I run into.
>>> However, whenever I hear the term "chance," I try to keep myself alert at all times so as not to lose a good opportunity I run into.
As the Korean old saying, when I can get a chance, I make sure I get it because I can't get a chance whenever I want to get it.
>>> As the old Korean saying goes, when I can get a chance, I make sure I get it because I can't get a chance whenever I want to get it.
>>> OR: According to an old Korean proverb, I must take advantage of opportunities while I can because I can't always have them.
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