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Do you think it¡¯s necessary to preserve traditions?

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I think I good traditions must preserve.
Traditions are spirit of country.
Tradition can make people together wherever they live. People can feel comfortable when they meet for the first time even though they don¡¯t know each other with same tradition.
So it is important how can keep preserving the good traditions.

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Thank you for this Miss Eun!

I think I good traditions must preserve.
>>>   I think good traditions must be preserved.
Traditions are spirit of country.
>>>  Traditions are spirits of the country.
Tradition can make people together wherever they live. 
>>>  Tradition can make people be together wherever they live.  
>>> OR:  Tradition can make people be as one wherever they live.  
>>> OR:  Tradition can make people unite wherever they live.  
People can feel comfortable when they meet for the first time even though they don¡¯t know each other with same tradition.
>>>  correct
So it is important how can keep preserving the good traditions.
>>>  So it is important how to keep preserving the good traditions.
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