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I need a social news so that I can know what¡¯s happened in our society every day and handle the crisis around me.

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Hi there, Judy!

Social news can be those that affect the society. Hence, I agree that it is paramount for us to know the news about social issues to be able to respond properly.

The grammar suggestion has been underscored for your convenience, please go over them carefully. 

See you again in class soon!

-T. Donna~

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