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Hi, Donna.
I actually busy now for working.
However, I will drive to go to my parent's house just after work.
So I have to do my homework now.
This morning, I saw a client who comes from Republic of South Africa.
She is an English teacher, and her intonation and pronunciation are so good just as you.
She visited us before, so this is the second time.
She got a radiofrequency treatment for her skin texture and pore improvement.
Anyway, otherwise of previous time, I felt comfortable to talk with her.
Today's homework is about a fashion.
After writing the sentence above, I couldn't keep go on, because there were full of clients in our clinic.
Back to my homework, I am absolutely bad at fashion.
Thus I don't try to buy my clothes.
Instead of me, my wife bought my clothes always, of course with my money. hahaha.
In fact, I like colorful clothes, but my wife doesn't like that.
But, I must admit that colorful clothes doesn't look like luxurious in many cases.
Take care.
See you soon.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good evening, Dr. Kim!

I hope that you had a blast during Chuseok. I never expected that I would have such a a busy time working at the same time enjoying over the past four days, the reason why I was only able to revert to your homework now. Thank you for your patience and understanding. So, how was your Chuseok?

It is great to hear a foreign client heading to your clinic these days. There are more opportunities to speak English not only for you but also to your entire team. I hope that your staff can also address your clients inquiries by the use of this language. I am sure that you were so comfortable and confident in talking to her that moment.

For clothes and overall fashion, some people are born with the knack of mixing and matching clothes and accessories. Well, over time, we can be able to learn to be fashionable by trying to look into the details of colors, textures, volume, and the balance of all of these. Style can be honed as time goes by. I agree with your wife that the simpler the better. It is also less time consuming to pick clothes according to your daily activities. Then, the more money you give, the more chances of wearing dapper clothes. ^^

Thank you very much for this well-organized  and very carefully thought homework! 

So, I will see you then tomorrow. Have  a great night!

-T. Donna ~

Hi, Donna.
>> Correct!

I actually busy now for working.
>> I am actually busy now (for work/ working).
Or: Actually, I am busy working now.

However, I will drive to go to my parent's house just after work.
>> Correct!

So I have to do my homework now.
>> Correct!

This morning, I saw a client who comes from Republic of South Africa.
>> This morning, I saw a client who comes from the Republic of South Africa.

She is an English teacher, and her intonation and pronunciation are so good just as you.
>> Correct!

She visited us before, so this is the second time.
>> Correct!

She got a radiofrequency treatment for her skin texture and pore improvement.
>> Correct!

Anyway, otherwise of previous time, I felt comfortable to talk with her.
>> Anyway, compared to the previous time, I felt comfortable to talk with her.

Today's homework is about a fashion.
>> Correct!

After writing the sentence above, I couldn't keep go on, because there were full of clients in our clinic.
>> After writing the sentence above, I couldn't keep going on, because there were full of clients in our clinic.

Back to my homework, I am absolutely bad at fashion.
>> Correct!

Thus I don't try to buy my clothes.
>> Correct!

Instead of me, my wife bought my clothes always, of course with my money. hahaha.
>> Instead of me, my wife buys my clothes always, of course with my money, hahaha!

In fact, I like colorful clothes, but my wife doesn't like that.
>> Correct!

But, I must admit that colorful clothes doesn't look like luxurious in many cases.
>> But, I must admit that colorful clothes don't look like luxurious in many cases.

Take care.
>> Correct!

See you soon.
>> Correct!
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