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Hi, Donna~
It's been approximately three weeks to meet you.
Thank you for your kindness and I'm very grateful that you encourage me to tell something in English.
I wait for your call everyday, and I enjoy your class.
I hope you will have a good holiday and see you next wednesday!

I've attended my medical school union since five years go.
People who trained with same specialist course belong to that union and every end of the year we gather to meet and say hello to each other.
At first, I feel awkward and uncomfortable with older alumni, but enjoying a good meal and simple games I was adjusted to that atmosphere.
Unfortunately, because of pandemic COVID virus, the union was stopped.
I hope it will open and meet alumni this year.

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Hi there again, Dr. Stella!

Truly, time flies like an arrow and it has been almost a month of talking to you daily. To me this feels like yesterday. Perhaps it feel this way when one is having fun doing something. I am always interested on what things you will say because our time is so short, I cannot ask all of the questions I want to know about you and your profession. Nonetheless, this composition answers a few of my inquiries in a meaningful and a productive way.

Reunions and mini-gatherings with former classmates or colleagues enriches our lives since these are the people we practically grew up with. We share the same goals and dreams since we majored in the same field or basically, because we are age mates. Hence, never feel awkward towards joining these get-together. I am sure, there are some colleagues waiting to hear a few words of experience from you too.

Here on your personal message and homework, I placed some grammar suggestions underlined for your guidance. Thank you so much for the sweet message. I aways feel 'healthy' and happy to talk to you always! ^^

Have a blast this Chuseok! Take care and enjoy!

-T. Donna~
Hi, Donna~
>> Correct
Or: Hi, Donna!

It's been approximately three weeks to meet you.
>> It's been approximately three weeks since I met you.

Thank you for your kindness and I'm very grateful that you encourage me to tell something in English.
>> Correct!

I wait for your call everyday, and I enjoy your class.
>> Correct!

I hope you will have a good holiday and see you next wednesday!
>> Correct!
Or: I hope you will have a good holiday and see you next Wednesday!

I've attended my medical school union since five years go.
>> I've attended my medical school reunion five years go.

People who trained with same specialist course belong to that union and every end of the year we gather to meet and say hello to each other.
>> People who trained with the same specialisation course belong to that union and every end of the year we gather to meet and say hello to each other.

At first, I feel awkward and uncomfortable with older alumni, but enjoying a good meal and simple games I was adjusted to that atmosphere.
>> At first, I feel awkward and uncomfortable with the older alumni, but enjoying a good meal and simple games with them made me feel well- adjusted to that atmosphere.

Unfortunately, because of pandemic COVID virus, the union was stopped.
>> Unfortunately, because of the pandemic due to the COVID virus, the union was stopped.

I hope it will open and meet alumni this year.
>> I hope it will open again so I can meet the alumni this year.

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