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Good evening, Donna.
It's almost done with my work.
As you know, I didn't have enough sleep last night, so I am very tired.
All I want to do is to have delicious foods with alcohol.
Sometimes I can't stop thinking about drinking alcohol, so I am a little worried about an addiction to alcohol.
I checked the weather just before.
I am sure you know the reason.
After this homework, I will drive my car with its roof down.
Now I feel better.
Today's homework is so difficult for me.
I have no idea the best place for driving.
I heard that coast roads in Jeju are good for driving because those roads are located near the sea.
For me, on my way to home after work, there are driving ways, and those are my best driving course.
That's because after going back home, I can see my family and eat some delicious foods.
Big holidays are coming.
I am looking forward it.
Are there big holidays in your country?
I have got to go now.

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Hello! Good evening, Dr. Kim!

Tonight, I hope that you can get the rest you need. This can be possible when you drink in small amounts just enough to kick in the heat in your body to warm it up to sleep. Certainly, you enjoyed driving top down on the road. At home, awesome food awaits. Take it easy because Chuseok is just around the corner and you have more food coming soon. Christmas and the New Year are the biggest holidays in my country. This is the time for the family to gather as one to eat, share stories, and be merry.

A driving range or place that we can say which is a good one may have smooth and hassle-free roads as well as breathtaking scenery along the way. In your country where there are mountains and plains, it is definite that driving can be very pleasurable. Thanks for sharing your route back home. Roads will always lead you there where it is safe, warm, and love abounds.

Now, kindly read the suggestions to some of your sentences below. You have used effective expressions to describe your driving place experience efficiently, great job! 

See you tomorrow!

-T. Donna~

Good evening, Donna.
>> Correct!

It's almost done with my work.
>> I'm almost done with my work.

As you know, I didn't have enough sleep last night, so I am very tired.
>> Correct!

All I want to do is to have delicious foods with alcohol.
>> Correct!

Sometimes I can't stop thinking about drinking alcohol, so I am a little worried about an addiction to alcohol.
>> Correct!

I checked the weather just before.
>> Correct!

I am sure you know the reason.
>> Correct!

After this homework, I will drive my car with its roof down.
>> Correct!

Now I feel better.
>> Correct!

Today's homework is so difficult for me.
>> Correct!

I have no idea the best place for driving.
>> Correct!

I heard that coast roads in Jeju are good for driving because those roads are located near the sea.
>> Correct!
Or: coastal roads

For me, on my way to home after work, there are driving ways, and those are my best driving course.
>> For me, on my way home after work, there are driving (ways/ routes), and those are my best driving courses.

That's because after going back home, I can see my family and eat some delicious foods.
>> Correct!

Big holidays are coming.
>> A big holiday is coming.

I am looking forward it.
>> I am looking forward to it.

Are there big holidays in your country?
>> Correct!

I have got to go now.
>> Correct!
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