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The most confident person I know is my dad. My father lived in poverty when he was young. The generation when my father was young is very different from now. But my dad studied and worked well, so he was always confident in his choices. He confidently confessed to his mother, proposed with confidence, and took great pride in his cooking. He is the most confident person I know.

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Hello, David! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


The most confident person I know is my dad. 
>>> CORRECT!

My father lived in poverty when he was young. 
>>> CORRECT!

The generation when my father was young is very different from now. 
>>> CORRECT!

But my dad studied and worked well, so he was always confident in his choices. 
>>> CORRECT!

He confidently confessed to his mother, proposed with confidence, and took great pride in his cooking. 
>>>  CORRECT!

He is the most confident person I know.
>>> CORRECT!
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