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Happy Tuesday!
It's not raining anymore.
It's shiny outside, so I hope that my day is getting better like the weather.
I feel better today than yesterday.
Emotional stress is gone everytime.
I need to think this way everyday.
Okay, today's homework is about driving.
As I told you, I actually don't like driving for a long time.
However, on my way to home after work, I enjoy driving my convertible car without roof.
Do you know "open car"?
I think this word is a Konglish, but many Koreans use this word about a convertible car.
Have you ever experienced a convertible car?
It's awesome.
I heard that most owners of convertible car rarely open the roof and some of them don't like a convertible mode anymore.
What a pity are they!
Everytime I open the roof, I feel so happy.
There is a wind touching my face and body.
Also, I can see the world so widely.
Thus, I check the weather around the closing time everyday.
I want you to feel this happiness someday, too.
Happy day!

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A happy Tuesday and an enjoyable afternoon too, Dr. Kim!

From a sad mode yesterday to a very happy mode today, hurray! I guess getting in your car and driving it with the roof off simply gives you so much joy. I guess that this really made your day! I hope nothing goes wrong to a perfect weather and your perfect day.

Anyway, I have never been to a convertible car. I think I will enjoy it so much however when I try it someday. Most cars in my city are Sports Utility Vehicles (SUV) since I live in the mountains and this car is the best for going up the hills. I practiced driving before and I felt powerful holding the steering wheels. So, drive safely and when you feel down, just go for a drive then.

Thank you for sending me your homework so early today. I think your happiness makes you accomplish more things and even faster! I hope it continues until the end of the day. Well, your exposition contains carefully chosen words to express your thoughts about your answer. Further, your organizational skill is top class. Your style is distinct. Keep these all up. 

Keep your eyes on the road. Have a good drive way back home later!

-T. Donna~ 

Happy Tuesday!
>> Correct!

It's not raining anymore.
>> Correct!

It's shiny outside, so I hope that my day is getting better like the weather.
>> Correct!

I feel better today than yesterday.
>> Correct!

Emotional stress is gone everytime.
>> Correct!

I need to think this way everyday.
>> Correct!

Okay, today's homework is about driving.
>> Correct!

As I told you, I actually don't like driving for a long time.
>> Correct!

However, on my way to home after work, I enjoy driving my convertible car without roof.
>> Correct!
>> However, on my way home after work, I enjoy driving my convertible car without its roof.

Do you know "open car"?
>> Corerct!

I think this word is a Konglish, but many Koreans use this word about a convertible car.
>> I think this word is Konglish, but many Koreans use this word to mean a convertible car.

Have you ever experienced a convertible car?
>> Correct!

It's awesome.
>> Correct!

I heard that most owners of convertible car rarely open the roof and some of them don't like a convertible mode anymore.
>> I heard that most owners of convertible cars rarely open the roof and some of them don't like the convertible mode anymore.

What a pity are they!
>> What a pity to them!

Everytime I open the roof, I feel so happy.
>> Correct!

There is a wind touching my face and body.
>> Correct!

Also, I can see the world so widely.
>> Correct!

Thus, I check the weather around the closing time everyday.
>> Correct!

I want you to feel this happiness someday, too.
>> Correct!

Happy day!
>> Correct!
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