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Writing task: How will you know if a piece of information is confidential or not?


To keep confidential is hard to follow in many cases.

Confidential of company and person and legal are slightly different actually.

Sometimes "name" is required as hidden but not all the times, likewise other information is the same situation when we treat it.

I think in our daily life, we need to have human sense of it.

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Hi, Caleb!
Thank you again for doing your homework. I agree, that we should be sensitive enough to know which information should be kept private and those that we can share.
-T. Caitlyn
To keep confidential is hard to follow in many cases.
>> Confidentiality is hard to follow in many cases.
Confidential of company and person and legal are slightly different actually.
>> Confidentiality of a company, a person, and documents are slightly different.
Sometimes "name" is required as hidden but not all the times, likewise other information is the same situation when we treat it.
>> Sometimes, "name" is considered confidential, the same as with other information.
I think in our daily life, we need to have human sense of it.
>> I think we should have the sense to distinguish which is which.
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