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He is not qualified to propose a bill og banning autu recording.

His intention and purposes are very unjust, unfair and a kind of revenge of his past dishonor.

This is an abuse of bad political power.

The purpose of his bill is to protect the beavior of bad the rich and polician who they do very often abuse, violent language and insult to the poor and weak people.

He is a mean and he shows the level of Korean politician.

So I am upset.

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Good day, Ms. Lily!
I guess the worst thing that could happen is when a bad politician's proposal has been approved by the government.
I hope their will be an appropriate debate about this.
See you!
Aki~
He is not qualified to propose a bill og banning autu recording.
>>> He is not qualified to propose a bill banning auto recording.

His intention and purposes are very unjust, unfair and a kind of revenge of his past dishonor.
>>> His intention and purposes are very unjust, unfair, and a kind of revenge for his past dishonor.

This is an abuse of bad political power.
>>> CORRECT!

The purpose of his bill is to protect the beavior of bad the rich and polician who they do very often abuse, violent language and insult to the poor and weak people.
>>> The purpose of his bill is to protect the behavior of the bad, rich, and politicians who very often abuse, use violent language and insult the poor and weak people.

He is a mean and he shows the level of Korean politician.
>>> CORRECT!

So I am upset.
>>> CORRECT!

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