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This weekend is Chuseok. The holidays are long. I can't go to Jeju Island because the plane ticket is too expensive to go to Jeju Island. But I am planning to go to Busan to meet my friend. I will go to Busan and see the sea and play with my friends.

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Hi Julie,

Weekends are important in one's life because it tells one that the work week has ended and by this time you're done with your duty for that week and now it is time for the body and mind to rest. The weekend is also a good chance to spend quality time with family and friends.  And the weekend is a great time to spend a few moments planning your upcoming week. As little as 30 minutes of planning can yield significant gains in productivity and reduced stress. The week feels a lot more manageable when you go into it with a plan because all you have to focus on is execution. " Always have a fabulous weekend" ~ Teacher QUENNY..


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This weekend is Chuseok. The holidays are long. I can't go to Jeju Island because the plane ticket is too expensive to go to Jeju Island. 
>> This weekend is Chuseok Holiday and it's a long weekend holiday for us. .  I plan to go to Jeju Island but I can't go to Jeju Island because the plane ticket is too expensive to go to Jeju Island. 
But I am planning to go to Busan to meet my friend. I will go to Busan and see the sea and play with my friends.
>> But I change my plans and I am going to Busan to meet my friend. I will go to Busan and see the Haeundae beach and play with my friends.

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This weekend is Chuseok. The holidays are long. I can't go to Jeju Island because the plane ticket is too expensive to go to Jeju Island. But I am planning to go to Busan to meet my friend. I will go to Busan and see the sea and play with my friends.
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