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How to find someone with confidence.

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First, you can tell by looking at the person's eyes. Eyes tell a lot about a person. Second, you can tell from the person's tone of voice. Confident people are really good at asserting themselves. People with such an imposing tone of voice make you think of yourself as a confident person. Finally, you can tell by your attitude when you present. No matter how wonderful your words are, if you lack self-confidence, you may not be able to convey them well. If you are confident, you will be able to speak even poorly written texts beautifully.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


First, you can tell by looking at the person's eyes. 
>>> CORRECT!

Eyes tell a lot about a person. 
>>> The eyes tell a lot about a person.

Second, you can tell from the person's tone of voice. 
>>> CORRECT!

Confident people are really good at asserting themselves. 
>>> CORRECT!

People with such an imposing tone of voice make you think of yourself as a confident person.
>>> CORRECT!

Finally, you can tell by your attitude when you present. 
>>> CORRECT!

No matter how wonderful your words are, if you lack self-confidence, you may not be able to convey them well. 
>>> CORRECT!

If you are confident, you will be able to speak even poorly written texts beautifully.
>>> CORRECT!
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