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What do you think is the worst crime a person could commit? Why?

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The worst crime a person could commit is definitely about any types of murder. Even thought it is not a directly murder, conspiracy to commit murder is also same. And I want to place under the murder category the any kinds of thinking and action related to make people want to die. Because if someone harass others before to be died, the victims may feel that death is better then live. That case, some people will say the others are not dead, so it is no murder. However, I think it is also kind of murder.

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Thank you, Arissa! 

I appreciate your answer and I agree. Murder is the worst for me as well. 
What I like most with your answer was when you mentioned about harassments. 
It's true! And I think that involves bullying as well. 
People who do those justify themselves as not murderers but with their actions, they are killing their victim's spirit to live on. 
They are so cruel. :(

I hope that the world we live in today will turn to be a better one in the future. 

~ Teacher Gina


The worst crime a person could commit is definitely about any types of murder. Even thought it is not a directly murder, conspiracy to commit murder is also same. And I want to place under the murder category the any kinds of thinking and action related to make people want to die. Because if someone harass others before to be died, the victims may feel that death is better then live. That case, some people will say the others are not dead, so it is no murder. However, I think it is also kind of murder.

>> The worst crime a person could commit is definitely any type of murder. Even though it is not a direct murder, conspiracy to commit murder is the same. And I want to place any thinking and action to make people want to die under the murder category. Because if someone harasses others before dying, the victims may feel that death is better than living. In that case, some people will say the others are not dead, so it is not murder. However, I think it is also a kind of murder.


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