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Tell me about your top three animals that fascinates you. Why are they your top three?

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I'm not that interested in the animals, but an animal I watched on TV was very memorable to me.
It's name is 'Goblin shark'.
It has a small body that is not suitable for sharks, but it is a shark.
It has a weird head, and weird mouth.
The strangest thing is the way that it hunt or eat the prey.
If you watch the video of Goblin shark, then you'll know, it has a hidden jaw inside of the mouth.
And while it is hunting or eating, the hidden jaw come out form the mouth, and catch a prey with it.
This scene shocked me, so it is the most memorable animal for me.

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Hello John!
What a terrifying animal it is! I looked it up on Youtube and I was shocked too. Anyway, keep up the enthusiasm for writing. ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

I'm not that interested in the animals, but an animal I watched on TV was very memorable to me.
>>I'm not that interested in animals, but an animal I watched on TV was very memorable to me.
It's name is 'Goblin shark'.
>>Its name is the 'Goblin shark'.
It has a small body that is not suitable for sharks, but it is a shark.
>>It has a small body that is not common for sharks, but it is a shark.
It has a weird head, and weird mouth.
>>CORRECT!
The strangest thing is the way that it hunt or eat the prey.
>>The strangest thing is the way that it hunts or eats the prey.
If you watch the video of Goblin shark, then you'll know, it has a hidden jaw inside of the mouth.
>>CORRECT!
And while it is hunting or eating, the hidden jaw come out form the mouth, and catch a prey with it.
>>And while it is hunting or eating, the hidden jaw comes out from its mouth, and catches a prey with it.
This scene shocked me, so it is the most memorable animal for me.
>>CORRECT!
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