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Gemma ~~
Power outage again? HAHAHHA
I had a class with teacher Beth and we talked about you. hahaha
I hope we can have class tomorrow.
But I might not have a calss tomorrow because the strongest typoon is comming to korea now.
It rains cats and dogs already.
Weather forcast warns all of citizens to prepare the typoon.
The typoon will be the strongest and most powerful typoon which we have ever experienced as they say.
I am scared TT
Wish me luck!!!

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Hi there Ms. Eunice! I'm so sorry for not having you yesterday. There was a power interruption in my area and these days, it's getting too often. I feel disappointed. Anyway, I hope you'll be fine. Take care! Beat the typhoon! Hahaha! 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Power outage again? HAHAHHA  ( AGAIN AND AGAIN :( )
>>> CORRECT
I had a class with teacher Beth and we talked about you. hahaha 
( WHY ME??? HAHAHA )
>>> CORRECT
I hope we can have a class tomorrow.
>>> CORRECT
But I might not have a class tomorrow because the strongest typhoon is coming to Korea now.
>>> CORRECT
It rains cats and dogs already.
>>> It's been raining cats and dogs. 
Weather forcast warns all of citizens to prepare the typoon.
>>> The weather forecast warns all of citizens to prepare for the typhoon.
The typhoon will be the strongest and most powerful typhoon which we will ever experience as they say.
>>> CORRECT
I am scared TT
>>> CORRECT
Wish me luck!!!
>>> CORRECT
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