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I try to make the best choices, but it's difficult to choose one.
I think life is always a series of choices.
Simply, I have to select what I will eat for dinner, and which dress I will wear everyday.
I consider buying some presents by which recivers are impressed.
These selections won't cause troubles although I don`t make the best choice, so I choose them comfortably.
However, there are some important decision that is able to affect my life.
For example, when I see the patients, I should select one treatment option.
I offer various information about treatment options, and I try to participate in the decision with patient.
Everytime I have to decide something, I think deeply and sometimes ask specialists or friends to advise.
Neverthless I couldn't always make best choices, but I learn from those mistakes and next time if I am in a similar situation, I try to repeat the same mistake and make a better choice.

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Good afternoon, Dr. Stella!

Making good choices is not easy. We have to always weigh in the consequences of their results. So, your processes below on how to choose somethings make you who you are today and I strongly believe that you have chosen well in so many aspects of your life.

This was a very meaningful exposition of how choices and carefully evaluating what your thought affect your one's life. You have done a great effort in choosing the finest words to describe and illustrate your answer. Then, go over the grammar suggestions in two of your sentences.

Excellent job!

See you!

-T. Donna~ 

I try to make the best choices, but it's difficult to choose one.
>> Correct!

I think life is always a series of choices.
>> Correct!

Simply, I have to select what I will eat for dinner, and which dress I will wear everyday.
>> Correct!

I consider buying some presents by which recivers are impressed.
>> Correct!
Or: receivers

These selections won't cause troubles although I don`t make the best choice, so I choose them comfortably.
>> Correct!

However, there are some important decision that is able to affect my life.
>> However, there are some important decisions that are able to affect my life.

For example, when I see the patients, I should select one treatment option.
>> Correct!

I offer various information about treatment options, and I try to participate in the decision with patient.
>> Correct!

Everytime I have to decide something, I think deeply and sometimes ask specialists or friends to advise.
>> Correct!

Neverthless I couldn't always make best choices, but I learn from those mistakes and next time if I am in a similar situation, I try to repeat the same mistake and make a better choice.
>> Correct!
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