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Are older people actually wiser? Why or why not?

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Are older people actually wiser? Why or why not?

In my opinion, it is true that older people wiser than younger people. These days, there is a popular word in Korea called the MZ generation. This word refers to people from the early 1990s to the early 2000s. I¡¡can see that younger people these days are really rude. I¡¡don¡¯t know what makes them change to be rude or tackless. Lots of university students do the part time job. But according to some stories, they are really self-centered and don't work efficiently. In contrast, older people have their know-how to work faster and correctly. Also they have good patience rather than younger people. I hope many young people go in the right direction.

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Hi, Harry! :)
Thank you for taking the time to share your opinion about this matter. 
It is true that we have a lot to learn from older people. Too bad, a lot of young people these days think that they're better. 
I sincerely hope that the younger generation would do better than their predecessors. 
I hope you're having a great day Harry!
See you again on Wednesday. ^_^
~Teacher Charry

In my opinion, it is true that older people wiser than younger people. 
>> In my opinion, it is true that older people are wiser than younger people.
These days, there is a popular word in Korea called the MZ generation. 
>> These days, there is a popular expression in Korea called the "MZ generation".
This word refers to people from the early 1990s to the early 2000s. 
>> This expression refers to the people born in the early 1990s to the early 2000s. 
I can see that younger people these days are really rude. 
>> CORRECT!
I don¡¯t know what makes them change to be rude or tackless. 
>> I don't know what makes them act rude or tactless. 
Lots of university students do the part time job. 
>> Lots of university students do part-time jobs. 
But according to some stories, they are really self-centered and don't work efficiently. 
>> CORRECT!
In contrast, older people have their know-how to work faster and correctly. 
>> CORRECT!
Also they have good patience rather than younger people. 
>> Also, they are more patient as compared to younger people. 
I hope many young people go in the right direction.
>> I hope many young people go to the right direction.



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