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What is the best movie you have ever seen? What is the story all about?

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My best movie is Man in black. Because it is very fun and an actor is act ver well. This movie's story is an alien is live with particular person, and the particular person is agent to kill bad alien. And this movie is comedy SF movie, so it is best movie of my life.

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Hi, Daisy!
Thank you for sharing your answer with me. I think this is a great movie since the Lead actor is a great actor and popular. I hope you can watch more movies soon or read books. ^_^
~Teacher Erin

My best movie is Man in black.
>>The best movie I have seen is Men in Black.
 Because it is very fun and an actor is act ver well.
>>Because it's very funny and the actor acts very well.
 This movie's story is an alien is live with particular person,
>> The story of this movie is about an alien who lives in the body of a person.
 and the particular person is agent to kill bad alien.
>>The particular person is an agent who killed bad aliens.
 And this movie is comedy SF movie,
>>And this movie is a comedy SF movie.
 so it is best movie of my life.
>>So, this is the best movie for me.

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