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Enumerate the machines and equipment in your office

작성자: 박*태
2022-09-02 1013

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First of all I didn`t know about "Enumerate" words so, I looked into my electronic dictionary and then realized the meaning of word
It was the as same as meaning of "Listed up"
Well, my office have a lot of machines and equipment because a lot of people used this office.
From junior to senior, they took action for copying the important paper and printed a lof of work meterial.
In some reason, We often do lots of printing, It was affected our envrionment status and so on
That`s the why goverment have a think of a big issue to treat these things
And so many notebook and monitor were that places in order to work consisely and strictly.
OK. That`s all my office machines . See ya on the phone

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Justin, 

Machines and equipment play essential roles in the office. High-quality office equipment and reliable support services can make a huge difference in your office's volume of work and the quality of results. With the proper equipment, your office will function more efficiently and be more productive in a day. " Work Productively" ~ Teacher QUENNY..:) 

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First of all I didn`t know about "Enumerate" words so, I looked into my electronic dictionary and then realized the meaning of word.
>> First of all, I didn`t know about "Enumerate" words so, I looked into my electronic dictionary and then realized the meaning of the word.
It was the as same as meaning of "Listed up"
>> It was the as same as the meaning of "Listed up" or " name one by one '" 
Well, my office have a lot of machines and equipment because a lot of people used this office.
>> Well, my office has a lot of machines and equipment because it's very useful to us and all of us in the office can use these machines and equipment to work better and faster. 
From junior to senior, they took action for copying the important paper and printed a lof of work meterial.
>> From my Junior to Senior years these machines and equipment help me a lot in many ways and they took action from copying important paper to printing a lot of work materials. 
In some reason, We often do lots of printing, It was affected our envrionment status and so on
>> For some reason, we often do lots of printing that affected our environmental status and so on.  
That`s the why goverment have a think of a big issue to treat these things
>> That`s why the government has to think of a good idea or strategy to solve this big issue in our country. 
And so many notebook and monitor were that places in order to work consisely and strictly.
>> And so many notebooks and computers were put into place in order to work concisely and strictly.
OK. That`s all my office machines . See ya on the phone
>> OK. That`s all about my office machines and equipment. See you on the phone. 

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First of all I didn`t know about "Enumerate" words so, I looked into my electronic dictionary and then realized the meaning of word
It was the as same as meaning of "Listed up"
Well, my office have a lot of machines and equipment because a lot of people used this office.
From junior to senior, they took action for copying the important paper and printed a lof of work meterial.
In some reason, We often do lots of printing, It was affected our envrionment status and so on
That`s the why goverment have a think of a big issue to treat these things
And so many notebook and monitor were that places in order to work consisely and strictly.
OK. That`s all my office machines . See ya on the phone
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