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자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Describe in as much detail as possible what your office looks like.

작성자: 박*태
2022-09-02 1366

회원님의 영작문

It was already told you items that I answer the during our class
but, I repeat it myself eventhough before times I told you already.
Well... My office have a wonderful prospetives and scenery.
There is a lots of trees and parks beside my office and flow Han-river besides my office.
When I was confused something or lose my control about something, I stood up and look at the Han-river
More often It is a relief on my own instead of angering something else.
Also, there are some boats on the Han-river floating their own way of doing sulfering
It is short homework because I already set to speech yesterday
See ya on the phone

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Justin, 
The workplace environment is the most critical factor for the employees to perform. Having a positive office environment has become more important before until now because having a constructive work environment can lead to increased productivity, good work performance, health, and safety, making employees happier and more confident in doing their job with morale. And Creating a positive work environment more deeply motivates and engages employees, leading to higher job satisfaction and employee retention within the organization, not to mention less stress among the employees. "Work Productively" ~ Teacher QUENNY..

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It was already told you items that I answer the during our class but, I repeat it myself eventhough before times I told you already.
>> I already answer this question and told you the items during our class but I will repeat them by myself. 
Well... My office have a wonderful prospetives and scenery.
>> Well... My office has wonderful perspectives and scenery.
There is a lots of trees and parks beside my office and flow Han-river besides my office.
>> There are a lot of trees and parks nearby my office and the flow of the Han river beside my office.
When I was confused something or lose my control about something, I stood up and look at the Han-river. 
>>When I'm confused about something or lose control of something, I stood up and look at the Han river near the office. 
More often It is a relief on my own instead of angering something else.
>>More often it is a relief for me when I feel stressed and I do it to refresh my mind instead of getting angry when something bad happens. 
Also, there are some boats on the Han-river floating their own way of doing sulfering
>>Also, there are some boats on the Han River floating their own way. 
It is short homework because I already set to speech yesterday.
>> It is short homework because I already said to a speech yesterday.
See ya on the phone
>> See you on the phone.

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It was already told you items that I answer the during our class
but, I repeat it myself eventhough before times I told you already.
Well... My office have a wonderful prospetives and scenery.
There is a lots of trees and parks beside my office and flow Han-river besides my office.
When I was confused something or lose my control about something, I stood up and look at the Han-river
More often It is a relief on my own instead of angering something else.
Also, there are some boats on the Han-river floating their own way of doing sulfering
It is short homework because I already set to speech yesterday
See ya on the phone
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