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If you were an item of clothing, what would you be and why?

작성자: 김*경
2022-09-02 2596

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If I were an item of clothing, I would like to be jeans. Jeans seem to help people more attractive and feel more comfortable. Jeans can go well with any kind of clothing and any place. Even I saw some people in jeans in a wedding hall where people are usually supposed to wear formally, however, I didn't feel jeans didn't suit in that formal place. That's because jeans make people look as good as other formal dresses do. Therefore, I like Jeans with comfort and beauty at the same time.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening, Steve! ^-^

Thank you so much for answering your homework.

The way someone dresses says a lot about their culture, personality, and taste. People can utilize clothing to improve their physical appearance and shield their bodies from harmful elements and high temperatures in a variety of climates.

First impressions are frequently made depending on what someone is wearing.

Have a good weekend!

__T. Mayleen :)


If I were an item of clothing, I would like to be jeans.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: If I were a piece of clothing, I'd want to be a pair of jeans.
Jeans seem to help people more attractive and feel more comfortable.
>>> Jeans seem to make people more attractive and more comfortable.
>>> OR: People who wear jeans appear to be more appealing and at ease.
Jeans can go well with any kind of clothing and any place.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Jeans can be worn everywhere and with any type of clothes.
Even I saw some people in jeans in a wedding hall where people are usually supposed to wear formally, however, I didn't feel jeans didn't suit in that formal place.
>>> I even saw some people in jeans in a wedding hall where people are usually supposed to dress formally. However, I didn't feel jeans didn't suit in that formal place.
That's because jeans make people look as good as other formal dresses do.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: This is due to the fact that jeans are just as attractive as other formal attire.
Therefore, I like Jeans with comfort and beauty at the same time.
>>> Therefore, I like jeans with comfort and beauty at the same time.
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