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In my opinion, a neighbor needs to respect others and give an assistance if they ask for it. Also, ideal neighbors make no troubles for each other.

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Good afternoon, Judy!

I absolutely agree with your stance regrading being a good neighbor. For us to have this kind of neighbor, we need to be one first.

Kindly go over my suggestion on the second sentence. Overall, you've answered the homework question very well, great job!

See you again tomorrow in class.

-T. Donna~
In my opinion, a neighbor needs to respect others and give an assistance if they ask for it. 
>> Correct!

Also, ideal neighbors make no troubles for each other.
>> Correct!
Or: Also, ideal neighbors make no troubles against each other.
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