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Talk about the movie/TV show you last saw.

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Recently I watched a historical movie about the ancient three kingdoms which were antagonistic to each other in Korea. As a descendant of one kingdom Silah, I was for the country at the beginning. However, I was getting so curious about the other two countries. Each country had its indigenous culture and a cause to fight for. I felt that I needed to look at anything from the perspective of others.

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Hello, Steve! ^^,)

I am a fan of Korean historical movies and series, so though I am not from Korea, I can somewhat relate to what you're saying. 
Most of the series I've seen were about the kingdom of Goguryeo.

Learning about the past is fascinating because we have an understanding of a shared past and a communal identity, and we get this shared experience through our common knowledge of our history.

See you later in class.^^

__T. Mayleen :)


Recently I watched a historical movie about the ancient three kingdoms which were antagonistic to each other in Korea.
>>> I recently saw a historical film about the ancient three Korean kingdoms that were antagonistic to each other.
>>> OR: I recently saw a historical drama about the three rival Korean kingdoms that once existed.
As a descendant of one kingdom Silah, I was for the country at the beginning.
>>> As a descendant of the Silah kingdom, I was for the country at the beginning.
>>> OR: I was initially in favor of the nation since I am a descendent of the Silah kingdom.
However, I was getting so curious about the other two countries.
>>> However, I was getting very curious about the other two countries.
Each country had its indigenous culture and a cause to fight for.
>>> Each country had its own indigenous culture and a cause to fight for.
I felt that I needed to look at anything from the perspective of others.
>>> CORRECT
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