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Do you think people who exercise are happier than those who don¡¯t? Why or why not?

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2022-08-31 1474

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People who exercise are happier than who don't.
Exercise can make healthy mind not only body health.
The phycology siad, when you are sad or depressin, first you should go to the work out. It must help you.
Exercise give us a muscular strength. So we will be a diligent people and it can avoid a feeling of lethargy.
It make me happy.
People who don't exercise are always tired because they don't have power. They feel easily exhausted and it make bad mood.
Exercise doesn't have any bad things.
Nowadays it is a essential.

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Hello Eun Chae!
Health is wealth!  We all need to exercise even if we are busy.  Having no time is a lame excuse.  Adjust to a healthy lifestyle instead of getting sick.  ^^

~T. Maine

People who exercise are happier than who don't.
>> People who exercise are happier than those who don't.
Exercise can make healthy mind not only body health.
>> Exercise can make a healthy body and mind. 
The phycology siad, when you are sad or depressin, first you should go to the work out.
>> Psychologists said, "When you are sad or depressed, first you should go work out".
 It must help you.
>> Correct. 
Exercise give us a muscular strength. 
>> Exercise gives muscular strength.
So we will be a diligent people and it can avoid a feeling of lethargy.
>> So we will be diligent and it can avoid the feeling of lethargy. 
It make me happy.
>> It makes me happy. 
People who don't exercise are always tired because they don't have power. 
>> Correct. 
They feel easily exhausted and it make bad mood.
>> They easily feel exhausted and have a bad mood. 
Exercise doesn't have any bad things.
>> Exercise doesn't have disadvantages. 
Nowadays it is a essential.
>> Nowadays, it is essential to life. 

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