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How often do you go shopping?

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Dear Quenny.
I sometimes had a shopping all by myself. I`ll feel free and some kind of refresh just as I got to the moment
But, Most of the times I had a shopping with my family together with my wife and kids
It was a delicious time to me instead of having a something like depress. :)
I did a shopping a one times per month. Actually I somethimes often had shopping two times per month.
As I mentioned before, My apartment is placed nearby Hyundai Outlet and Lotte world tower shopping
So, most of time I`ll go that place where I buy something convienently
So that`it. all my shopping theme that I give you a certain information
See you on the phone.

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Hi Justin, 
Shopping is not just buying new clothes it¡¯s an emotion, it is happiness that gives you immense pleasure.  Shopping gives a calming influence on some people. After a busy or hectic day, shopping distracts most of the person from negative feelings. Many times, shopping is helpful for any individual, as shopping relieves stress and anxiety which can be useful. So if next time you are having a bad day, maybe you can seek a mood boost with a little shopping. " Spend your money wisely"  ~ Teacher QUENNY..


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Dear Quenny.
I sometimes had a shopping all by myself. I`ll feel free and some kind of refresh just as I got to the moment.
>>Dear Quenny.
I sometimes had shopping all by myself. I enjoyed it because I felt I was free and some feeling of refreshed just as I got to the moment.
But, Most of the times I had a shopping with my family together with my wife and kids.
>> But, most of the time I go shopping with my family together with my wife and kids.
It was a delicious time to me instead of having a something like depress. :)
>> It was a relaxing time for me instead of having a feeling of depression. :)
I did a shopping a one times per month. Actually I somethimes often had shopping two times per month.
>> I went shopping once a month. Actually I sometimes often had shopping twice a month.
As I mentioned before, My apartment is placed nearby Hyundai Outlet and Lotte world tower shopping
>> As I mentioned before, my apartment place is nearby Hyundai Outlet and Lotte world tower shopping.
So, most of time I`ll go that place where I buy something convienently
>> So, most of the time I`ll go to that place where I buy something conveniently.
So that`it. all my shopping theme that I give you a certain information.
>> So that's all about the shopping theme that I give you a piece of certain information.

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Dear Quenny.
I sometimes had a shopping all by myself. I`ll feel free and some kind of refresh just as I got to the moment
But, Most of the times I had a shopping with my family together with my wife and kids
It was a delicious time to me instead of having a something like depress. :)
I did a shopping a one times per month. Actually I somethimes often had shopping two times per month.
As I mentioned before, My apartment is placed nearby Hyundai Outlet and Lotte world tower shopping
So, most of time I`ll go that place where I buy something convienently
So that`it. all my shopping theme that I give you a certain information
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