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If you could be reborn as an animal, what would you choose: to be a dog or a cat? Why?

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If I could be reborn as an animal, I would be an eagle flying high above the earth. Humans have been trying to develop various technologies to fly as high as birds. Their endeavors have made a lot of fruits so far, and their technologies have come a long way. I feel for these human challenges. I wish I could fly high as eagles. Maybe that's why I can't hide my excitement every time I get on a plane. The panoramic scenes from the sky take my breath away all the time. It is amazing.

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Good afternoon! ^_^) Happy Wednesday!

Steve, thank you for always finding time to accomplish you compositions.

Humans have had dreams and fancies of being able to fly for ages. It's possible that while we stooped on the surface of the Earth and watched great birds fly by, we started to feel a little wing envy.

I'll speak with you in class later. See you!

__T. Mayleen :)


If I could be reborn as an animal, I would be an eagle flying high above the earth.
>>> CORRECT [If I could be reborn as an animal, I would be an eagle, flying high above the earth.]
>>> OR: I would be an eagle, soar above the ground, if I could be reborn as an animal.
Humans have been trying to develop various technologies to fly as high as birds.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: In an effort to be able to fly as high as birds, humans have been working on numerous technologies.
Their endeavors have made a lot of fruits so far, and their technologies have come a long way.
>>> Their endeavors have brought a lot of fruit so far, and their technologies have come a long way.
>>> OR: Their efforts have so far produced a great deal of fruit, and their technologies have advanced considerably.
I feel for these human challenges. I wish I could fly high as eagles.
>>> I feel for these human challenges. I wish I could fly as high as an eagle.
Maybe that's why I can't hide my excitement every time I get on a plane.
>>> CORRECT
The panoramic scenes from the sky take my breath away all the time. It is amazing.
>>> The panoramic views from the sky take my breath away all the time. It is amazing.
>>> OR: My breath is constantly taken away by the panoramic views from above. It is incredible.
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