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Tell me about at least three particular places which are within walking distance from your home

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Dear Quenny.
Tell me about at least three particilar places which are within wakling distance from your home.
I tell you 3 places in detail.
1. Hyundai Outlet.
We would like to visit shopping mall named Hyunai Outlet.
There were several items which were cheap and qood quality, well made product at the aim of buying something.
Our family usually took some time at that mall where we go to visit
2. CGV Cinema
We also like going to movie theater.
In those of our sensitve interest, We have been that place so many times as possible as we could.
3. Lotte world tower
There is a huge, giant buildings which one of the most tallest in Asia to bulid the tower called Lotte world tower nearby my house
Lotte world tower includes many of selling items like clothes, something to eat, someone who relax their in mind
O.K. Those place like to visit our family best chosen place.
Thanks

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Hi Justin,

Writing, like any other skill, is something we can get better at with time and practice. From sending emails to preparing presentations, writing is often a day-to-day task in many professions spanning diverse industries. Writing skills go beyond grammar and spelling. Accuracy, clarity, persuasiveness, and several other elements play a part in ensuring your writing is conveying the right message. Keep improving your English skills. ~ Teacher Quenny



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Dear Quenny.
Tell me about at least three particilar places which are within wakling distance from your home.
>>Dear Quenny.
Tell me about at least three particular places which are within walking distance from your home.
I tell you 3 places in detail.
>> I'll tell you 3 places in detail.
1. Hyundai Outlet.
We would like to visit shopping mall named Hyunai Outlet.
There were several items which were cheap and qood quality, well made product at the aim of buying something.
Our family usually took some time at that mall where we go to visit.
>> 1. Hyundai Outlet.
We would like to visit a shopping mall named Hyundai Outlet.
There were several items which were cheap but has good quality, well-made products with the aim of buying something.
Our family usually took some time at that mall where we go to visit and buy some of their products. 
2. CGV Cinema
We also like going to movie theater.
In those of our sensitve interest, We have been that place so many times as possible as we could.
>> 2. CGV Cinema
We also like going to the movie theaters.
This Cinema is one of those is our sensitive interests. We have been to that place as many times as possible we could.
3. Lotte world tower
There is a huge, giant buildings which one of the most tallest in Asia to bulid the tower called Lotte world tower nearby my house
Lotte world tower includes many of selling items like clothes, something to eat, someone who relax their in mind.
>> 3. Lotte World Tower
  There is a huge giant building and one of the tallest Towers in Asia called Lotte World Tower nearby my house. 
Lotte World Tower includes many selling items like clothes, various kinds of restaurants where we can try and eat various cuisines, and a place where someone can relax their mind.
O.K. Those place like to visit our family best chosen place.
Thanks
>>Okay. Those are the places we like to visit and our family's best-chosen places in South Korea.  Thanks

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Dear Quenny.
Tell me about at least three particilar places which are within wakling distance from your home.
I tell you 3 places in detail.
1. Hyundai Outlet.
We would like to visit shopping mall named Hyunai Outlet.
There were several items which were cheap and qood quality, well made product at the aim of buying something.
Our family usually took some time at that mall where we go to visit
2. CGV Cinema
We also like going to movie theater.
In those of our sensitve interest, We have been that place so many times as possible as we could.
3. Lotte world tower
There is a huge, giant buildings which one of the most tallest in Asia to bulid the tower called Lotte world tower nearby my house
Lotte world tower includes many of selling items like clothes, something to eat, someone who relax their in mind
O.K. Those place like to visit our family best chosen place.
Thanks
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