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Hi there, Donna.
There was a matter in my clinic today.
One of our employ got sick this morning.
She was so dizzy and had a nausea.
I suspected that she had a orthostatic hypotension by dehydration.
We let her lie down and take a rest.
Fortunately, she became alright.
After that, I asked her about past history of disease, but she responded that this was the first time that she got sick.
Maybe I should check her condition for some days.
Anyway, today's homework is about cook.
In the past, I used to cook many foods for others, especially my wife.
I could make many soup, curry, pasta, and so on.
As you know, nowadays I am so busy, thus I don't cook at all.
Sometime I am surprised that I had no idea even where the pan is.
However, I cooked a delicious curry with my daughters a few months ago.
It was so nice.
In fact, many people enjoy my curry which I made by myself.
I cook my curry with many vegetables, potatoes, sweet potatoes, pork, and so on.
What is your special dish?
See you soon~

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Good day, Dr. Kim!

I hope that your employee feels better because you will be understaff and it is hard to serve clients if your team is incomplete. Anyway, she is lucky because there are two doctors in your clinic. 

Cooking is one of the basic skills we ought to learn in life since we eat everyday. However, in a country such as yours where life is preoccupied by work, it is almost impossible to cook. Thus, food delivery services from your favorite restaurants come handy. Nonetheless, cooking is an act of love that we gladly do with our family and when we get the time, we share it with them. I believe that you are a great cook from the range of dishes you can create as mentioned below. As for me, I can cook whatever I like to eat. I can make Filipino dishes, simple Korean dish, a little bit of Chinese food, Italian pasta, among others. My son would lick the plate after eating so I guess my seasoning, heat, and acidity is just fine.

Below, your homework had only three suggestions. You are improving each time on your compositions. Also, your range of vocabulary is getting richer. Thank you for your constant effort in  sharing your thoughts and ideas about the simple questions on the homework task. 

Have a wonderful Tuesday!

-T. Donna~


Hi there, Donna.
>> Correct!

There was a matter in my clinic today.
>> Correct!

One of our employ got sick this morning.
>> One of our employees got sick this morning.

She was so dizzy and had a nausea.
>> Correct!
Or: She was so dizzy and had nausea. 

I suspected that she had a orthostatic hypotension by dehydration.
>> Correct!

We let her lie down and take a rest.
>> Correct!

Fortunately, she became alright.
>> Correct!

After that, I asked her about past history of disease, but she responded that this was the first time that she got sick.
>> After that, I asked her about some past history of disease, but she responded that this was the first time that she got sick.

Maybe I should check her condition for some days.
>> Correct!

Anyway, today's homework is about cook.
>> Anyway, today's homework is about cooking.

In the past, I used to cook many foods for others, especially my wife.
>> Correct!

I could make many soup, curry, pasta, and so on.
>> I could make many recipes such as soup, pasta, and so on.
>> I could make soup, curry, pasta, and so on.

As you know, nowadays I am so busy, thus I don't cook at all.
>> Correct!

Sometime I am surprised that I had no idea even where the pan is.
>> Correct!

However, I cooked a delicious curry with my daughters a few months ago.
>> Correct!

It was so nice.
>> Correct!

In fact, many people enjoy my curry which I made by myself.
>> Correct!

I cook my curry with many vegetables, potatoes, sweet potatoes, pork, and so on.
>> Correct!

What is your special dish?
>> Correct!

See you soon~
>> Correct!
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