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Do you often lend money to friends or family? Why or why not?

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Sometimes, I lend money to friend and family.
First in my friend case is small money.
I think we are still young, so they don't need big money except an emergency situation like hostital or sick.
So I just lend dinner money when my friends did not bring their wallet. and they always pay me back soon.
But family case, I don't want to return their money.
It is because, my parents spent huge of money for me and even I borrowed the money for my sister to pay for the acadamy.
And my sister doesn't want get back her money.
I appresiate for them so I can lend my money for them to glad mind. But frequent deal is not good. It is right that should be careful.

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Hello Eun Chae!
Thank you for sharing your ideas on this question.  It is crucial to use money with people you don't know.  As you know, money was taken from your hard work and doesn't grow on trees.  Check your spelling and grammar corrections.  Keep on learning. ^^


~T. Maine


Sometimes, I lend money to friend and family.
>>Sometimes, I lend money to my family and friends. 
First in my friend case is small money.
>> First in my friend's case, I lend her some money. 
I think we are still young, so they don't need big money except an emergency situation like hostital or sick.
>> I think we were still young at that time, so she didn't need a big amount of money except during an emergency situation like going to the hospital or sickness. 
So I just lend dinner money when my friends did not bring their wallet. 
>> So I just lend some dinner money when my friends do not have their wallets. 
and they always pay me back soon.
>>And they always pay me back soon. 
But family case, I don't want to return their money.
>>But in my family's case, I don't want them to return the money I gave to them. 
It is because, my parents spent huge of money for me and even I borrowed the money for my sister to pay for the acadamy.
>> It is because my parents spent a huge amount of money on me and I even borrowed some money from my sister to pay for my academy. 
And my sister doesn't want get back her money.
>>And my sister doesn't want to get her money back. 
I appresiate for them so I can lend my money for them to glad mind. 
>> I appreciate them so I can lend them my money to make them feel glad. 
But frequent deal is not good. 
>> But frequently the deal is not good. 
It is right that should be careful.
>> It is right that we should be careful. 

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