¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Does education guarantee a good job?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: Ȳ*ÇÏ
2022-08-29 1026

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

It is true that people who are educated well get a better job but there are a lot of people who don't get a job although they graduated from the best university in Korea. There are many reasons why they don't have a job. One of the reasons can be a high education. Many people misunderstand that they are well trained workers due to their school's name but we have experienced that people who have studied a lot don't always show high performance. I believe that high educated people are not suitable for factory workers or business men because most of them are good at teaching students or writing research papers. To disscuss this subject, we have to define what is a good job and a bad job. Most people believe that a job which earn a lot of money is better than accupations which make a small amount of money. If the standard of evaluation is money, it is almost true that high educated people get a better job.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

It is true that people who are educated well get a better job but there are a lot of people who don't get a job although they graduated from the best university in Korea. 
>> CORRECT! 
OR >> It is true that people who are educated well get a better job but there are a lot of people who don't get a job although they graduated from prestigious uiniversities in Korea. 
There are many reasons why they don't have a job. 
>> CORRECT! 
One of the reasons can be a high education. 
>> CORRECT! 
Many people misunderstand that they are well trained workers due to their school's name but we have experienced that people who have studied a lot don't always show high performance. 
>> CORRECT! 
I believe that high educated people are not suitable for factory workers or business men because most of them are good at teaching students or writing research papers. 
>> CORRECT! 
To disscuss this subject, we have to define what is a good job and a bad job. 
>> CORRECT! 
Most people believe that a job which earn a lot of money is better than accupations which make a small amount of money. 
>> Most people believe that a job which earn a lot of money is better than opccupations which make a small amount of money. 
If the standard of evaluation is money, it is almost true that high educated people get a better job.
>> CORRECT! 

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
126797 Homework ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 2
126796 What are the common reasons that you fail to include some... ±¸*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 1
126795 i\'m gone to the Restaurant À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 2285
126794 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 691
126793 Homework Àå*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 2
126792 Would you trust a counselor with your secret, especially about... ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 2
126791 homework ¼Õ*±Ù ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 1240
126790 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 0
126789 Home work ±è*¶õ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 1
126788 Homework ¿¡*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 1
126787 Hw ÃÖ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 1
126786 Hw ÃÖ*Çö ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 1
126785 homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 3
126784 Homework ¿ì*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 934
126783 I AM THE COFFEE PERSON! ±è*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 1397
126782 Home work ±è*¶õ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 3
126781 3/21 ¼­*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 0
126780 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 2
126779 3.22 homework ±Ç*¸² ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 1412
126778 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-22 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04