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If you\'re a movie actor, would you rather be the hero that saved the girl or the villain that took

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I would rather be the hero to help people. I feel strange to see myself on the side of bad guys. I think How uncomfortable I feel when I am on the side of villains may prompt the education that I have been taught at school, church, or home. For better or worse, Korean children have been told not to do wrong now, and they feel guilty to do something that they are not supposed to do. I am not saying that teaching children to do something good has some problems. Rather, We need to help the next generation to think over many lessons that are told or commanded to do by their teachers or parents before they put them into practice.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there, Steve! ^-^)

"A great protagonist has the capacity to change."
"A hero achieves his/her goals in the end at the expense of the villain, who does not."

Character growth feeds the soul of the story, and turns it from a series of plot events to a tale worth telling (and worth reading). A great protagonist has the ability to learn from their experiences and become a better (though not always) person.

Thank you so much for answering your homework. I will talk to you again tomorrow.

__Teacher Mayleen :)


I would rather be the hero to help people.
>>> I would rather be the hero and help people.
I feel strange to see myself on the side of bad guys.
>>> I feel strange seeing myself on the side of the bad guys.
I think How uncomfortable I feel when I am on the side of villains may prompt the education that I have been taught at school, church, or home.
>>> I think the discomfort I feel when I am on the side of villains may prompt the education that I have been taught at school, church, or home.
For better or worse, Korean children have been told not to do wrong now, and they feel guilty to do something that they are not supposed to do.
>>> For better or worse, Korean children have been told not to do wrong now, and they feel guilty about doing something that they are not supposed to do.
I am not saying that teaching children to do something good has some problems.
>>> CORRECT
Rather, We need to help the next generation to think over many lessons that are told or commanded to do by their teachers or parents before they put them into practice.
>>> Rather, we need to help the next generation think over many lessons that they are told or commanded to do by their teachers or parents before they put them into practice.
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