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How do you describe your neighborhood? Answer in a few sentences.

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I could say my neighborhood likes having a meeting with other people and spreading rumors to them.
Because of this problem, our family used to keep a good relationship, but we have never been pretending to know them.

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Hi there, Judy!

I guess some neighborhoods have this kind of environment. It may not be very healthy so staying distant may be the best choice. However, being nice is stil agood thing.

Well, grammar-wise, you nailed your answer in spite of the complexity of your sentence pattern. Great job! I will ask you in class on what the last part of your sentence means. Excellent job.

See you!

-T. Donna~
I could say my neighborhood likes having a meeting with other people and spreading rumors to them.
>> Correct!

Because of this problem, our family used to keep a good relationship, but we have never been pretending to know them.
>> Correct!
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