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HOMEWORK:
What should you do when you get rejected? Answer in a few sentences.

I don't think rejection is bad or good. I believe we all have the right to refuse. So I'm fine if someone would reject my offer. I can prepare a better proposal and present it again.

I'm sorry for late. Have a wonderful weekend evening Donna.

I am having a good evening with Gorum!

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Hi there, Hae Ju!

It's so wonderful to see Gorum on this photo! I can see that he is having such a great ride. I am sure that you had a fantastic weekend together.

Meanwhile, I could not agree more with your answer. We have the right to refuse and say yes to things that may be good or bad to us. We need to keep an open mind regarding these matters because we can improve oursel by doing so. Then, congratultions to a perfect grammar on your answer portion. I have just have one suggestions on the later part of your sentence. Please go over it.

So, I will see you later in class. Thank you for your dilgence as always!

-T. Donna~ 

I don't think rejection is bad or good. 
>> Correct!

I believe we all have the right to refuse. 
>> Correct!

So I'm fine if someone would reject my offer.
>> Correct!

I can prepare a better proposal and present it again.
>> Correct!

I'm sorry for late. 
>> I'm sorry for being late.

Have a wonderful weekend evening Donna.
>> Correct!

I am having a good evening with Gorum!
>> Correct!
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