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Tell me something about yourself

작성자: 박*태
2022-08-25 1446

회원님의 영작문

Dear Quenny.
Firsr of all, the day of my suggestion change the freetalking1 into OPIC master course book. You are kind to accept my offer.
I`m pleaseant you all of kind acceptance.
By the way, As I said before, I was on my way of going home when you taught me.
I`m in the place somewhere where I was noisy, not silent place so I didn`t you to catch up naturally.
I`m in the more focus on you when you ask something.:)
Okay, let me try the homework at this time."Tell me something about yourself"
Well, I`m always to have a positive thinkings I will be a person who are likely to be the positive one.
And, I`m consistently try to more study foreign language because of my life time value
even though I was exhasted every part of work, study, careing my kids, I`m always try to study my own area and be prepared to be
future growth on my own way.
That`s it. good night teacher Quenny.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Justin, 
As a job seeker, knowing how to answer, “Tell me about yourself,” gives you a great opportunity to spotlight the job skills and experience that make you the ideal candidate for the job. And because it’s a question that many hiring managers lead with, it's also your way to start off on the right foot. 
Be concise. Don’t take up too much time with your response. You don’t have to tell the hiring manager every single thing that you think makes you a great candidate. Just give a few important details that will spark their interest in learning more about you, and you’ll get the interview off to a strong start.  Good Luck. ~ Teacher Quenny..:)  

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Dear Quenny.
Firsr of all, the day of my suggestion change the freetalking1 into OPIC master course book. 
>> Dear Quenny,
First of all, on the day of my suggestion changes the freetalking1 into the OPIC Master course book. 
I`m pleaseant you all of kind acceptance.
>> I`m pleased you all of your kind acceptance.
By the way, As I said before, I was on my way of going home when you taught me.
>> By the way, as I said before, I was on my way to going home when you taught me.
I`m in the place somewhere where I was noisy, not silent place so I didn`t you to catch up naturally.
>> I`m in a place somewhere where it was noisy, not a silent place so I didn`t catch up naturally. 
I`m in the more focus on you when you ask something.:)
>> I`m more focused on you when you ask me something. 
Okay, let me try the homework at this time."Tell me something about yourself"
>> Okay, let me try the homework at this time."Tell me something about yourself".  
Well, I`m always to have a positive thinkings I will be a person who are likely to be the positive one.
>> Well, I'm an optimistic person and I always have positive thinking I will be a person who is likely to be the positive one. 
And, I`m consistently try to more study foreign language because of my life time value
even though I was exhasted every part of work, study, careing my kids, I`m always try to study my own area and be prepared to be future growth on my own way.
>> And, I'm consistently trying to study a foreign language because of my lifetime value even though I was exhausted in every part of work, study, and caring for my kids, I'm always trying to study my own area and be prepared to be future growth in my own way.  
That`s it. good night teacher Quenny.
>> That`s it. good night teacher Quenny.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Dear Quenny.
Firsr of all, the day of my suggestion change the freetalking1 into OPIC master course book. You are kind to accept my offer.
I`m pleaseant you all of kind acceptance.
By the way, As I said before, I was on my way of going home when you taught me.
I`m in the place somewhere where I was noisy, not silent place so I didn`t you to catch up naturally.
I`m in the more focus on you when you ask something.:)
Okay, let me try the homework at this time."Tell me something about yourself"
Well, I`m always to have a positive thinkings I will be a person who are likely to be the positive one.
And, I`m consistently try to more study foreign language because of my life time value
even though I was exhasted every part of work, study, careing my kids, I`m always try to study my own area and be prepared to be
future growth on my own way.
That`s it. good night teacher Quenny.
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