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Maybe when I failed the CPA(Certificated Public Accountant) test, that was most miserable time for me.
In Korea, must pass the test in order to work as CPA.
CPA is different to work accounting division in company as accountant.
Anyway I prepared CPA test for a long time but I failed.

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Hello JT!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Maybe when I failed the CPA(Certificated Public Accountant) test, that was most miserable time for me.

>> Maybe when I failed the CPA (Certificated Public Accountant) test, that was the most miserable time for me.
In Korea, must pass the test in order to work as CPA.

>> In Korea, you must pass the test in order to work as a CPA.
CPA is different to work accounting division in company as accountant.

>> A CPA is different to working in an accounting division in a company as an accountant.
Anyway I prepared CPA test for a long time but I failed.

>> Anyway, I prepared for the CPA test for a long time but I failed.

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