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Hello, Donna!
I'm very happy to meet you.
Although I am difficult to tell my thoughts using English, I enjoy and wait for your morning call.
I hope I speak English fluently and don't hesitate to tell my ideas using English.
See you tommorow!

Homework>
What reservation do you have to make in the next coming days? 

During summer, conference activities are stopped like summer vacation.
Coming autumn season, many conferences is scheduled to be held.
I am planning to participate in several conferences.
Part of them is opened in distant cities, so I have to make reservation for hotels to stay during conference.
Also, I will go there by taking a high-speed train.
So, I should reserve a train ticket.
Using 'Korail` application, I could reserve the high-speed train conveniently anytime.

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Hello there again, Dr. Stella! Good evening!

Thank you very much for your short and sweer personal message. It's a pleasure to meet and speak with you in class. I sometimes think that 10 minutes is short to discuss the lessons with you but it's all worth it because we can mazimize the time and make it so efficient. My adrenalin rushes during our class, thanks to you and your quick thinking and fluency in English. Don't worry, you are on the right track.

Your homework answer displays rich details and systematic organization of ideas. Your transition words are appropriate and your set of vocabulary are suited to your discussion. The determiners 'a' and 'the' are  really tough to memorize and use perfectly so always observe how they are used in sentences. Great job on your homework!

Keep writing and see you again soon!

-T. Donna~

Hello, Donna!
>> Correct!

I'm very happy to meet you.
>> Correct!

Although I am difficult to tell my thoughts using English, I enjoy and wait for your morning call.
>> Although I find it difficult to tell my thoughts using English, I enjoy and wait for your morning call.

I hope I speak English fluently and don't hesitate to tell my ideas using English.
>> Correct!

See you tommorow!
>> Correct!

Homework>
What reservation do you have to make in the next coming days?

During summer, conference activities are stopped like summer vacation.
>> Correct!
Or: During summer, conference activities stop like the summer vacation.

Coming autumn season, many conferences is scheduled to be held.
>> Come autumn season, many conferences are scheduled to be held.
 
I am planning to participate in several conferences.
>> Correct!

Part of them is opened in distant cities, so I have to make reservation for hotels to stay during conference.
>> A part of them is opened in distant cities, so I have to make reservations for hotels to stay during conferences.

Also, I will go there by taking a high-speed train.
>> Correct!

So, I should reserve a train ticket.
>> Correct!

Using 'Korail` application, I could reserve the high-speed train conveniently anytime.
>> Using the 'Korail` application, I could reserve a high-speed train conveniently anytime.
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