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I yearn for a lifestyle of a famous celebrity sometimes. I hope to have sponsorships from high-end brands and leave videos of my golden age on YouTube.

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Good evening, Judy!

Living a life of a celebrity seems to be overly glamorous and posh. I agree that living this kind of life may be super cool for a week or two but may be tiring in the long run because it is very high maintenance and you have to live in others' expectations. So, why not!

Anyway, these two very meaningful sentences are awesome. Thank you for your diligence and effort always. 

See you tomorrow!

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