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Homework

작성자: 김*우
2022-08-25 1319

회원님의 영작문

Good afternoon, Donna.
It's raining on and off today.
I just ate "Boode zige" for my lunch.
Do you know that food?
"Boode" means army in English.
I heard that some people got ham, sausage, and something like that from US army soldiers long time ago in Korea.
And then they cooked a soup with those, and that soup is called "Boode zige".
Anyway, that soup is a little bit spicy, but very delicious, so I am sure that you will like it.
Today's homework is about lying of my staff.
As you may know, everyone lie everyday.
Most lying is not a big deal, but sometimes a lie will causes a serious problem.
Especially, we work in a clinic, and we do something to other's face and body.
When my staff lie just about a little thing, I usually try to move on.
However, if one staff lie about patients, I will punish her with the word and the action.
In addition, I will inform all staffs about the problem.
I think we never should make a mistake about patient's face and body.
Thank you. Have a good day.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening, Dr. Kim!

Rainy days and the autumn season call for some soup or stew. Then, "Boode zige" or Budaae Jjigae as I Googled the dish is suited to your weather. I hope you had a very filling and sumptuous lunch. I watched my favorite Korean YouTuber Maangchi and I think I can replicate the dish in my kitchen.

Now, for your homework answer, lying, may it be small or big may cause future problems. Addressing this issue in your clinic when it happens is very much needed. As a saying goes, "You can fool someone sometime but not all the time." I agree that everything needs to be perfect and flawless in your field of work.

So, thank you for sending your homework answer quite early today. A few suggestions I made have something to do with subject and verb agreements. Kindly read them and follow through. 

Have a wonderful evening.

-T. Donna~

Good afternoon, Donna.
>> Correct!

It's raining on and off today.
>> Correct!

I just ate "Boode zige" for my lunch.
>> Correct!

Do you know that food?
>> Correct!

"Boode" means army in English.
>> Correct!

I heard that some people got ham, sausage, and something like that from US army soldiers long time ago in Korea.
>> Correct!

And then they cooked a soup with those, and that soup is called "Boode zige".
>>  Correct!

Anyway, that soup is a little bit spicy, but very delicious, so I am sure that you will like it.
>> Correct!

Today's homework is about lying of my staff.
>> Today's homework is about a staff who lies.

As you may know, everyone lie everyday.
>> As you may know, everyone lies everyday.

Most lying is not a big deal, but sometimes a lie will causes a serious problem.
>> Most lying is not a big deal, but sometimes a lie will cause a serious problem.

Especially, we work in a clinic, and we do something to other's face and body.
>> Correct!
Or: Especially with our work in the clinic, we need to do something to other's face and body.

When my staff lie just about a little thing, I usually try to move on.
>> When my staff lies just about a little thing, I usually try to move on.

However, if one staff lie about patients, I will punish her with the word and the action.
>> However, if one staff lies about patients, I will punish her with words and actions.

In addition, I will inform all staffs about the problem.
>> Correct!

I think we never should make a mistake about patient's face and body. 
>> I think we should never make a mistake about a patient's face and body.

Thank you. Have a good day.
>> Correct!
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