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How important do you think it is to use public transport?

작성자: 박*태
2022-08-24 1132

회원님의 영작문

Dear Quenny. First of all, I would like to thank you all of your effort. Today lesson wasn`t easy for us. It`s noisy and disrupted place to be crowded people all around. In this situation you were very kind and all things you could have taught me. It`s a pleasent time for me.
Anyway. the issue of today writing theme, public transport.
Public transport is precious thing which have known for public status.
It is always useful to take way of ticketing everywhere, especially Korean public transportation system is marvelous.
In Seoul, particularly, every place have been connected by subway line and bus
It seems like spider web, ^-^
Whenever I go, I`m used to take subway except for the weekend, Actually my family use our own car in the weekend so as to play all around the korea.:)
Okay, That`s my report. Have a good night. see you on the phone tomorrow.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Justin, 
Transport is important on the basis of socio-economic factors as well as the influence it has on relationships between different countries. Through the role of moving people and goods, transport enables tourism and travel by making it possible for people to go to the places they want to see. Public transportation contributes to a healthier environment by improving air quality and reducing oil consumption, and through better land-use policies. It also helps to expand business development and work opportunities. " Keep safe traveling".  ~ Teacher QUENNY..


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Dear Quenny. First of all, I would like to thank you all of your effort. Today lesson wasn`t easy for us.
>> Dear Quenny. First of all, I would like to thank you for all of your efforts. Today's lesson wasn`t easy for us.
 It`s noisy and disrupted place to be crowded people all around. 
>>  It`s a noisy and disrupting place to be with crowded people all around. 
In this situation you were very kind and all things you could have taught me. 
>> In this situation, you were very kind and you tried your best to share all the things you could have taught me. 
It`s a pleasent time for me.
>> It`s a pleasant time for me.
Anyway. the issue of today writing theme, public transport.
>> Anyway, the topic of today's writing theme is public transport.
Public transport is precious thing which have known for public status.
>> Public transport is a precious type of transportation for passengers and has known for its public status or availability for use by the general public.
It is always useful to take way of ticketing everywhere, especially Korean public transportation system is marvelous.
>> It is always useful to take the way of ticketing everywhere, especially the Korean public transportation system is marvelous.
In Seoul, particularly, every place have been connected by subway line and bus
>> In Seoul, particularly, every place have been connected by subway line and bus.  
It seems like spider web, ^-^
>> It seems like spider web, ^-^(CORRECT) 
Whenever I go, I`m used to take subway except for the weekend, 
>> Whenever I travel in our country I'm used to taking the subway except for the weekend. 
Actually my family use our own car in the weekend so as to play all around the korea.:)
>> Actually, my family uses our own car on the weekend for us to travel all around South Korea.:)
Okay, That`s my report. Have a good night. see you on the phone tomorrow.
>> Okay, That`s my report. Have a good night. See you on the phone tomorrow.
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Dear Quenny. First of all, I would like to thank you all of your effort. Today lesson wasn`t easy for us. It`s noisy and disrupted place to be crowded people all around. In this situation you were very kind and all things you could have taught me. It`s a pleasent time for me.
Anyway. the issue of today writing theme, public transport.
Public transport is precious thing which have known for public status.
It is always useful to take way of ticketing everywhere, especially Korean public transportation system is marvelous.
In Seoul, particularly, every place have been connected by subway line and bus
It seems like spider web, ^-^
Whenever I go, I`m used to take subway except for the weekend, Actually my family use our own car in the weekend so as to play all around the korea.:)
Okay, That`s my report. Have a good night. see you on the phone tomorrow.
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