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8/24 homework

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2022-08-24 891

회원님의 영작문

How do you usually make reservations?

I often need to make reservations for flights, accommodation, and restaurant.
Whenever I make reservations, I usually use online reservation system.
When I go to trip abroad, I need to reserve the flights and accommodation.
I used to compare several websites which is the cheapest, and there is many price comparison sites that people could easily find the cost-effective services.
Sometimes, I make reservations for the fancy and famous restaurants, then I also use internet website or reservation applications.
It is difficult to contact with the manager of restaurants, when the restaurant is crowded.
But, if I use online, I don’t need to wait for reaching the manager of restaurants.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Dr. Stella!

You have very organized and systematic ways on reservations for your accomodations and other needs. As a doctor, you have to attend to so many conferences as well as travel and tours both for work and pleasure. Consequently, looking for the cheapest deals is a way to maximize your budget. Online booking definitely made is faster and more convenient. In addition, we can compare options via our phones. Thanks to COVID-19, these are possible.

Looking at your homework answer, you made so many correct sentences. The suggestions I have places are some insertions of prepostitions as well as correct capitalization and subject-verb agreement. Read though and analyze them well. Thank you for your diligence and hard work!

Catch you later!

-T. Donna~

I often need to make reservations for flights, accommodation, and restaurant.
>> Correct!
Or: I often need to make reservations for flights, accommodation, and restaurants.

Whenever I make reservations, I usually use online reservation system.
>> Correct!
Or: Whenever I make reservations, I usually use an online reservation system.

When I go to trip abroad, I need to reserve the flights and accommodation.
>> Correct!
Or: When I go on a trip abroad, I need to reserve the flights and accommodations.

I used to compare several websites which is the cheapest, and there is many price comparison sites that people could easily find the cost-effective services.
>> I used to compare several websites on which is the cheapest, and there are many price comparison sites that people could easily find cost-effective services.

Sometimes, I make reservations for the fancy and famous restaurants, then I also use internet website or reservation applications.
>> Sometimes, I make reservations for the fancy and famous restaurants, then I also use the Internet websites or reservation applications.

It is difficult to contact with the manager of restaurants, when the restaurant is crowded.
>>  It is difficult to contact the manager of restaurants when the restaurant is crowded.

But, if I use online, I don’t need to wait for reaching the manager of restaurants.
>> But, if I use online, I don’t need to wait for reaching the manager of restaurants.
Or: But, if I use online, I don’t need to wait to reach the manager of restaurants.
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