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How do you usually make reservations?

I often need to make reservations for flights, accommodation, and restaurant.
Whenever I make reservations, I usually use online reservation system.
When I go to trip abroad, I need to reserve the flights and accommodation.
I used to compare several websites which is the cheapest, and there is many price comparison sites that people could easily find the cost-effective services.
Sometimes, I make reservations for the fancy and famous restaurants, then I also use internet website or reservation applications.
It is difficult to contact with the manager of restaurants, when the restaurant is crowded.
But, if I use online, I don¡¯t need to wait for reaching the manager of restaurants.

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Good day, Dr. Stella!

You have very organized and systematic ways on reservations for your accomodations and other needs. As a doctor, you have to attend to so many conferences as well as travel and tours both for work and pleasure. Consequently, looking for the cheapest deals is a way to maximize your budget. Online booking definitely made is faster and more convenient. In addition, we can compare options via our phones. Thanks to COVID-19, these are possible.

Looking at your homework answer, you made so many correct sentences. The suggestions I have places are some insertions of prepostitions as well as correct capitalization and subject-verb agreement. Read though and analyze them well. Thank you for your diligence and hard work!

Catch you later!

-T. Donna~

I often need to make reservations for flights, accommodation, and restaurant.
>> Correct!
Or: I often need to make reservations for flights, accommodation, and restaurants.

Whenever I make reservations, I usually use online reservation system.
>> Correct!
Or: Whenever I make reservations, I usually use an online reservation system.

When I go to trip abroad, I need to reserve the flights and accommodation.
>> Correct!
Or: When I go on a trip abroad, I need to reserve the flights and accommodations.

I used to compare several websites which is the cheapest, and there is many price comparison sites that people could easily find the cost-effective services.
>> I used to compare several websites on which is the cheapest, and there are many price comparison sites that people could easily find cost-effective services.

Sometimes, I make reservations for the fancy and famous restaurants, then I also use internet website or reservation applications.
>> Sometimes, I make reservations for the fancy and famous restaurants, then I also use the Internet websites or reservation applications.

It is difficult to contact with the manager of restaurants, when the restaurant is crowded.
>>  It is difficult to contact the manager of restaurants when the restaurant is crowded.

But, if I use online, I don¡¯t need to wait for reaching the manager of restaurants.
>> But, if I use online, I don¡¯t need to wait for reaching the manager of restaurants.
Or: But, if I use online, I don¡¯t need to wait to reach the manager of restaurants.
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