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Do you prefer long trips (for more than a week) or short trips (for one day or two days)? What are t

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회원님의 영작문

Initial thought, I prefer short trip rather than going long trip
It is because, Having a long trip, I feel bored and not enjoy joyful something any more.
When I decide to have a long trip, I always feel uncomportable at that time.
I`m very sensitive guy who feel uncertainty where I go longterm base.
So, I prefer short trip rather than long trip.
Another reason why I prefer short trip is a good way of consuming time management efficiently
Short trip have a advantage of using time management compact
With the aim of enjoying my time travel around the certain place, especially foreign country, Having a long trip is really bored.
In these reason, I prefer short trip rather than long trip.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Justin,
Traveling is an investment that equips a person with practical knowledge. Travelling also keeps away stress, depression, and anxiety. It provides a new atmosphere taking out a person from their comfort zone. Overall, traveling broadens the horizon of a person. On top of the health benefits, travel can also enhance your creativity, sense of happiness, and satisfaction. For the sake of your mental health, not only should you take vacations, but taking more frequent trips for a smaller period can help combat stress. And, they are good for overall well-being. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:


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Initial thought, I prefer short trip rather than going long trip
>> Initial thought, I prefer a short trip rather than going a long trip. 
It is because, Having a long trip, I feel bored and not enjoy joyful something any more.
> It is because I feel bored having a long trip and I don't enjoy it doing something anymore.
When I decide to have a long trip, I always feel uncomportable at that time.
>> When I decide to have a long trip, I always feel uncomfortable at that time.
I`m very sensitive guy who feel uncertainty where I go longterm base.
>>I`m a very sensitive guy who feels uncertain about where I go on a long-term base.
So, I prefer short trip rather than long trip.
>> So, I prefer a short trip rather than a long trip.
Another reason why I prefer short trip is a good way of consuming time management efficiently
>> Another reason why I prefer short trips is it's a good way of consuming time management efficiently.
Short trip have a advantage of using time management compact
>> Short trips have the advantage of using a time management compact. 
With the aim of enjoying my time travel around the certain place, especially foreign country, Having a long trip is really bored.
>> With the aim of enjoying my time travel around a certain place, especially a foreign country, having a long trip is really bored I think. 
In these reason, I prefer short trip rather than long trip.
>> For these reasons, I prefer short trips rather than a long trips.
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Initial thought, I prefer short trip rather than going long trip
It is because, Having a long trip, I feel bored and not enjoy joyful something any more.
When I decide to have a long trip, I always feel uncomportable at that time.
I`m very sensitive guy who feel uncertainty where I go longterm base.
So, I prefer short trip rather than long trip.
Another reason why I prefer short trip is a good way of consuming time management efficiently
Short trip have a advantage of using time management compact
With the aim of enjoying my time travel around the certain place, especially foreign country, Having a long trip is really bored.
In these reason, I prefer short trip rather than long trip.
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