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How can we develop good habits?

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That is very simple.
Just repeat everyday.
It is answer to develop good habits.

However it is hard to repeat something.
So it is hard to have good habits.
But if you repeat everyday something, you can get a good habits.

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Hello JT!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


That is very simple.

>> CORRECT!
Just repeat everyday.

>> Just repeat it everyday.
It is answer to develop good habits.
>> It is the answer to develop good habits.
However it is hard to repeat something.

>> However, it is hard to repeat something.
So it is hard to have good habits.

>> CORRECT!
But if you repeat everyday something, you can get a good habits.

>> But if you repeat something everyday, you can have good habits.

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