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Yeah, the leader that I've had an experience before for studying TOEIC. I didn't know how I lead this team, so I decided the way how to lead my team is to listen to opinions from team members. I think that was a good thing, because I can be close to members. Also, I can get along with them. But everyone didn't get a score that they want to. We got so close that we were busy hanging out together. :)

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Yeah, the leader that I've had an experience before for studying TOEIC.
>> Yes, I have experienced being a leader before when I was studying TOEIC.
I didn't know how I lead this team, so I decided the way how to lead my team is to listen to opinions from team members.
>> I didn't know how I should lead a team, so I decided to listen to opinions from team members.
I think that was a good thing, because I can be close to members.
>> I think that it was a good thing because I can be close to the members.
Also, I can get along with them.
>> Correct. OR I can also get along with them.
But everyone didn't get a score that they want to.
>> However, everyone wasn't able to get the score that they want to have.
We got so close that we were busy hanging out together. :)
>> We got so close that we had the chance of hanging out together.
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