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Schools have to exist not takecare service facilities but educational institutions.

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Ms. Lily!
I like the way you are very frank in expressing your opinion! Haha! well, you have the right to do that because you are an educator yourself.
See you later:)
Aki~
This policy will be abolished soon because it is an irrational and ignorant policy.
>>> CORRECT!

Furthermore, it is uneconomical and impractical.
>>> CORRECT!

Schools have to exist not take care service facilities but educational institutions
>>>  Schools exist not for care service facilities but  educational institutions.
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