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회원님의 영작문

What’s the weather like in your country?
There are four seasons in Canada. There are spring, summer, fall, and winter. Especially Canada is a cold country. So in winter, it snows a lot and is very cold. Montreal is not very cold, but winter is the longest.j
Does the weather affect your mood?
Yes. The weather affect my mood. I like snow a lot, but I hate thunder. Because I feel noisy and depressed when there is thunder.
How do rainy days make you feel?
There are times when I hate and like rainy days. I don't like the heavy rain, which is very dark and rough. Because it is depressing. But I usually feel good when I hear the sound of rain, so I like the light rain a little by little.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Se Won,
       The key objective of learning English is to be able to comprehend speech and make yourself understood in English. And to improve your vocabulary and pronunciation you can look up the word in a dictionary such as Dictionary.com to find out how it’s pronounced snd meaning of the word. There’s an icon beside every word, and if you click on it, you can listen to how the word is pronounced in different accents.  But keep in mind that you need to learn how it’s pronounced within a sentence as well. And this comes with exposure to authentic content and practice. ~ Teacher QUENNY..
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What’s the weather like in your country?
>> What’s the weather like in your country? (CORRECT) 
There are four seasons in Canada. There are spring, summer, fall, and winter. Especially Canada is a cold country. So in winter, it snows a lot and is very cold. Montreal is not very cold, but winter is the longest.j
>> There are four seasons in Canada. These are spring, summer, fall, and winter. Canada is a cold country, so in the winter season, it snows a lot and it,s very cold and winter is the longest season in Canada.  But I live in Montreal and the weather here is not very cold compared to other places in Canada. We mostly experience cool weather but it's also very cold in the winter season in our place. 
Does the weather affect your mood?
>>Does the weather affect your mood?(CORRECT) 
Yes. The weather affect my mood. I like snow a lot, but I hate thunder. Because I feel noisy and depressed when there is thunder.
>> The weather really affects my mood. I like cold weather and snow a lot but I hate the sound of thunder when it's raining. The sound of the thunder is loud and I feel scared when I hear sound of thunder.  I like when it's snowing because it's very cold and raining because I like to hear the sound of the raindrops and it makes me feel good. 
How do rainy days make you feel?
>>How do rainy days make you feel?(CORRECT)
There are times when I hate and like rainy days. I don't like the heavy rain, which is very dark and rough. Because it is depressing. But I usually feel good when I hear the sound of rain, so I like the light rain a little by little.
>> There are times when I hate rainy days. When I see the sky is very dark and rough I know that there's heavy rain coming and I dislike heavy rain that much because it brings floods in many places. I only like light rain because it's good to hear the sound of the raindrops and it's very nice to see the rainfall when it's raining. 
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What’s the weather like in your country?
There are four seasons in Canada. There are spring, summer, fall, and winter. Especially Canada is a cold country. So in winter, it snows a lot and is very cold. Montreal is not very cold, but winter is the longest.j
Does the weather affect your mood?
Yes. The weather affect my mood. I like snow a lot, but I hate thunder. Because I feel noisy and depressed when there is thunder.
How do rainy days make you feel?
There are times when I hate and like rainy days. I don't like the heavy rain, which is very dark and rough. Because it is depressing. But I usually feel good when I hear the sound of rain, so I like the light rain a little by little.
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