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I wrote down as below for today homework.


I think phone call is very good tool to communicate each other for real-time conversations.

But all the conversation depends on memory even if we write down it sooner, in this case they might miss some points and contents some times.

Some people can say "now a days many people do record for business call" but it is not easy to spare time to review record to verify call the contents.

And some times we receive phone call while we are doing other things or not 100% ready situation, but have to continue call as duty and respecting of caller since that person is customer or VIP or business partner.

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Hi, Caleb!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with what you have mentioned, for calls they don't leave a specific document unlike when writing emails wherein you can review it anytime.
-T. Caitlyn
I wrote down as below for today homework.
>> I wrote my homework for today below.
I think phone call is very good tool to communicate each other for real-time conversations.
>> I think a phone call is a very good tool to communicate with each other for real-time conversations.
But all the conversation depends on memory even if we write down it sooner, in this case they might miss some points and contents some times.
>> But all information during the conversation would depend on our memory even if we write down it sooner, in this case, they might miss some points and contents sometimes.
Some people can say "now a days many people do record for business call" but it is not easy to spare time to review record to verify call the contents.
>> Some people can say that nowadays many people record business calls but it is not easy to spare time to review those recordings to verify the call's contents.
And some times we receive phone call while we are doing other things or not 100% ready situation, but have to continue call as duty and respecting of caller since that person is customer or VIP or business partner.
>> And sometimes we receive a phone call while we are doing other things or not 100% focused, but have to continue the call as duty and as a form of respect to the caller since that person is a customer or a VIP or a business partner.
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