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If you could change anything about your present home, what would it be and why?

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I will change my piano,cheval glass and table. Because my piano's volume is small and old. And cheval glass is very old and foggy. Table is too long and very uncomfortable to pass between sofa and table.

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Hello, Daisy. Happy Monday!
I think your future home will be very incredible and comfortable. See you later in class, sweetie. ^_^
~Teacher Erin

I will change my piano,cheval glass, and table.
>>CORRECT
Because my piano's volume is small and old.
>>CORRECT
 And cheval glass is very old and foggy.
OR>>The cheval glass is old-fashioned and foggy.
 Table is too long and very uncomfortable to pass between sofa and table.
OR>>The table is too long and occupies too much space, it's hard to pass between the sofa and the table.
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