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What Disney character do you least like?

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Well, I don't like villans like a witch or a stepmother. So, whenever I watch the villans, I feel so bad and can't understand their minds. I repeat this word 'NO.' The main characters are so cool and have their own features. So, their lives are so great to watch, but because of villans...... However, I know thanks to villans, some characters can develop. In troubles, they do their best to overcome the problems. Because of this point, although I hate villans, I will never stop watching Disney movies.

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Hey there, Kimberly! 

I admire your thoughts about villains. In your homework, you successfully explained the bad and good points of villains in Disney movies. I agree that villains are cruel by nature, but the problems they cause help shape the main characters better.

I hope you have an amazing weekend!

See you on Monday!
~ Teacher Gela

Well, I don't like villans like a witch or a stepmother. 
>> Well, I don't like villains like a witch or a stepmother. 
So, whenever I watch the villans, I feel so bad and can't understand their minds. 
>> So, whenever I watch the villains, I feel upset and don't understand their minds. 
I repeat this word 'NO.' 
>> CORRECT
The main characters are so cool and have their own features. 
>> CORRECT
So, their lives are so great to watch, but because of villans...... 
>> So, their lives are so great to watch, but because of villains...... 
However, I know thanks to villans, some characters can develop. 
>> However, I know some characters can develop thanks to villains.
In troubles, they do their best to overcome the problems. 
>> When there are troubles, they do their best to overcome the problems. 
Because of this point, although I hate villans, I will never stop watching Disney movies.
>> CORRECT
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